Stutt tt t t er rr r
Love it!
keep it up and let me know when this demo is complete!
Good beat and solid progression.
Stutt tt t t er rr r
Love it!
keep it up and let me know when this demo is complete!
Good beat and solid progression.
Alright! We'll PM ya when its done ;D
Sweet track!
I was only a little bothered with the high pitch part of that flanging high sound. that part just needs the treble turned down a tad so it doesn't pierce the listeners ears.
The rest of the track has good progression and speed builds which is nice to hear in DnB. I was actually hoping you were going to get real technical with the drums at some point pulling off more stop go techniques.
overall a solid track.
I used to do a lot of DnB years ago.
Feel free to pm me with your messenger name to talk and work on music.
Well... I was kinda outta my mind when I had the sugar rush that made this song and I wasn't eally paying much attention to the bass or treble, But maybe sometime later I'll begin remastering my music so it will be better than what it already is... Thanks for the good comment and I'll pm ya now! :)
I was getting into it ...
at the end.
the concepts are good but this track could end up being twice as long if you keep working from where it progresses at the end of the track. some equalization is needed the treble is a tad to high. and i like your sub bass hit. wanted more of it. your normal kick needs some redefining.
keep it up!
o.. I forgot all about the EQ! :S Anyways, there's only one bass drum, unless your referring to the slice I made. Its meant to loop back to the beginning though, so i have no plans of going further.
Very Profesional
Thanks for spending time to review my track.
I like where you went with this song having some live guitar and nice splashes with your cymbals.
I would like to listen to the full version of this song sometime. to see how the intro and end are for the full mix.
your track left me wanting to hear more variation and progression with your melodies. I understand that you had shortened this mix and all the verses flow real smooth.
Its good to listen to professional work on newgrounds among a lot of the other material here.
Breakbeat Trance!
It was already invented but dont worry about it. We all have our own style in that case every artist can invent their own genre. The song Is fine the way it is the only little idea i have is use a delay or reverb on some of your drums for even more of a tumbling beat and more intense crashes.
Keep it up and let me know when your next track comes out.
Thanks! I added a delay to the snare, but then I tried reverb and it mucked everything up. Just trying to be original :S. I will keep you posted on my stuff, me and nintechno are probably gonna do something together.
Off to an awesome track
If you want help with mastering in fl studio pm me this song can go that extra mile if you work on making the sounds compliment eachother.
Personally i like your bass. and love the break down and rebuild. the introduction high sound needs softening and the bass needs to not be distorted. You were probably trying to make a stronger bass hit but ended up distorting it in the process.
If you have aim or a messenger I could give you lots of help in how to use fl studio.
Great first song!
Nice Work
I liked your ideas in the song and really enjoyed what you did at 0:40 and 1:40. Your beginning was a little discombobulated but other than that you had a kick ass track.
I think it is a milestone for every remixer to do this song.
I have a mix also! called Shattered Flakes check it out to here an IDM version.
Off to take off...
to a phenomenal song. I expect you to continue on this song and take it too what ppl want to hear in a song that builds so well. your soundz are all balanced well and so maybe a few hard kicks and into a main verse which leads to an epic breakdown to a main verse with more cheering and then slows down for a nice melodic ending.
Keep it up and if you ever need help with music making pm me. I know how to use the programs and am a teacher.
haha ok. thanks for the review, if i ever need help ill pm you! :D
I enjoyed ...
this song a lot! it felt backwards though like the beginning half should have been flipped with the second. But anyhow the way you ended the track so peacefully and with rich distinct sounds was very inspiring.
thank u :)
Hello There! Originally from New Jersey I spend most of my time going to college in Vermont and composing music. Currently have two albums in production and lots of experience using the music programs FLstudio, Ableton, and Cubase. Email me for a collab
Age 36, Male
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champlain college
Burlington VT, USA
Joined on 1/31/08