I dig that beat!
Awesome Job Man, the beginning takes you for a ride then just transcends so fluently to a more energetic fun track.
Keep it Up!
I dig that beat!
Awesome Job Man, the beginning takes you for a ride then just transcends so fluently to a more energetic fun track.
Keep it Up!
Hey Thanx, I wanted to make a track that had a fatbeat with a catchy sounds that would make you feel like you were working your way towards the night life of the city.
I like this track a lot.
You do something here that most people on newgrounds don't do when they write music and put it up for the community to flame.
And that is that your music has emotion and fine details. just takes practice to get all that you create to sound perfect.
Keep it up and let me know if you want to work together in the future. My project this year is to do an entire album of collabs and remixes. and also jump start my new artist name "Being Glass".
The track is all there Great work!
The next step is to master this track.
something that is very important when finishing a great well written track.
The track seems naturally quiet. sound volumes need to be adjusted so that the more important sounds are in the fore ground.
your cymbals and intro saw have to much reverb at the start. you have the nice rain effect on the cymbals that way but just tone it down a little.
the saw at the start with less reverb and slight equo adjustment will make it sound really powerful and ready to throw the person into your thumping kick.
ok the piano is really precious sounding but it is falling into the background of the track. Those blips you have are louder than the piano making them taking away the lead from the piano.
the background is really nice. But the violins need to be brought up in volume just a tad. the new synth is at the right volume the one that comes in after 3 minutes.
your crashes are the right volume and the kick just needs to have just a slightly faster attack and decrease and end so they are a little bit more defined that way when you do the rolls they don't sound like they muffle each other out.
I hope this helps you out and I will be happy to help more.
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Contact me whenever.
Thanks for the detailed review! I'm glad you're so constructive.
I've got your AIM...and am currently talking to you....so yeah.
Great percs!
hey love the track,
Wish the bass at 1:40 came in sooner.
The percs are awesome very well done. the track fits jumpstyle to perfection.
personally I would have became more crazy with that sound that came in at 30 seconds.
Let me know if you want me to remix this sometime for you!
Cheers great track!
Thanks bud
You need to do some touch ups!
you must be new to fl studio,
But thats ok If you need help I teach fl studio.
for starters i see you were trying to make a heavy kick and the such.
using preset samples are ok but you need to make sure your not losing the sound quality to your work.
you could get this song to sound much better. and be all the more love for chickens if you keep working at it.
kind of reminds me when i first started out like 5 years ago.
good luck and enjoy.
thanks 4 commenting
Yes I agree with Fire 118
the FPC kit you used does not fit the mood with the rest of your song. otherwise it is all well orchestrated. the piece has good transitions and sounds all beautiful otherwise.
Keep it up man!
Also hit me a pm...
I can help you out with the drums and anything else, I teach Fl studio.
and if you want to collab let me know work on doing a whole collab album this year.
Hey Nice Style!
For a few days in logic you are still making some awesome work. I thought your drums were a lil to sparatic in the beginning but they fit perfect later on.
I am going throught whole downtempo phase right now so let me know if you want to collab on a project. I use primarily fl studio.
Keep the flow going!
I have used FL for many months really, thanks for the support, i'll surely hit you up soon!
-Monodisc
Good work Freeze!
I like the track you written here, its beauty out rises its creepyness. good use of pacing and all the sounds work very good with each other. can't say there is anything worth mentioning that is bad about your song.
Enjoy and good luck to you.
Thanks very much, that's nice of you to say.
Nice Demo
Good luck on your album,
I am currently working on a couple right now also.
the track sounds good. something is a lil off with your mastering like your treble might be a lil to high to everything else.
if you ever want to collab let me know I am starting a collab album this year.
hey love the bass!
this song reminds me a lot of Felix laband
Its been ages since I have heard from you whats new?
Yeah sorry, i had a big project goin'.
But now i'm back for more music. see my new post.
Greetz from the netherlands.
Hello There! Originally from New Jersey I spend most of my time going to college in Vermont and composing music. Currently have two albums in production and lots of experience using the music programs FLstudio, Ableton, and Cubase. Email me for a collab
Age 36, Male
Teacher
champlain college
Burlington VT, USA
Joined on 1/31/08