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nice start!

Your off to a great start! you still need to make your song more coherent and a little less cowbell. unless you like the cowbell. before i go further i want to ask if the song is still a midi and if you intend to make this into an mp3?

basically the sounds dont play off eachother. you have a strong synth a blippy base and a bouncy cowbell. the notes to the song are fine but i bet if you stuck to a more centered focus of sound this track can be made into a great composition.

if it is still a midi I could remix it into an MP3 that demonstrates what i am talking about for you.

good luck!

Good remix!

I love the new synths you made the song to. but I dont think you made it your own song yet. you should write your own verse to it or at least make it more prominent.

go for the OC!

Hey Nice Work!

I use fl also so if you ever want to do any projects with me you can. You need to use an equalizer badly. besides that the song is awesome.

Contact me i would enjoy talking with you.

T-Free responds:

Thank you!
Of course we could make one song together, I'd really like to make that experience!
You could remake this song if you like and if its better than now, we have a great new song.^^

(Sorry for my bad English, I'm from Germany)

Creative!

I really enjoyed the first minute and last minute of the song. the soundscape you created flows well to the ideas you have. Like your friend below who gave you a lot of valuable feedback I agree with him.

Wow!!

Your song here is very impressive
at first i thought it wasnt going to go anywhere and be stagnant with harmony. but you picked it up with awesome percusion and a thematic climax in the end that was totaly uncalled for.

thankyou for sharing this song!

Nice Work!

I enjoyed the task you were trying to achieve with this song. You set the mood well keeping enough environment in the song to keep the listener interested.

I do suggest that your main synth should be worked on. it seems to slice through the song a little to sharp against the other instruments. the synth doesn't have enough strentgh or elaboration to poll off the position you gave it.

melody was great as well as the bass and percussion!

if you want to work togethor sometime let me know!

Dark-Frando responds:

ahh, the problem with not having any beta-testers for music =P although on that note, I've recently noticed that these songs are either missing something or... well... something. I can't quite place it.

Anyways thanks for the review!

Hello There! Originally from New Jersey I spend most of my time going to college in Vermont and composing music. Currently have two albums in production and lots of experience using the music programs FLstudio, Ableton, and Cubase. Email me for a collab

Trevor Dericks @Psy-nigma

Age 36, Male

Teacher

champlain college

Burlington VT, USA

Joined on 1/31/08

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