its a fun song!
I give you credit its original and fun. has a nice vibe to chill to.
if you ever want to do a coop project i bet we could make some interesting music!
its a fun song!
I give you credit its original and fun. has a nice vibe to chill to.
if you ever want to do a coop project i bet we could make some interesting music!
Thanks, I tried to keep a pretty chill vibe through out the song, but I didn't want it to be too boring so I had to add the bit at the end.
I'd think I'd be up for a collab sometime. Start up the FLP (if you use FL 8) and maybe I'll try something sometime. Maybe not too soon though, I probably wouldn't get anything done.
make it your own!
you have the ideas. master this track and do your own verses. Just put it this way
"WWOCD" (what would O C remix do). I dont want to sound harsh but you did half the work and that is why i gave you half the score.
i hope it goes far
a remix must do its grace or shouldnt be made at all.
i gave you a five since you have done half the work so far. i will update and redo my review if you let me know when your finished.
you need to master the track! even if you are not done with the track it should still have sound levels adjusted properly. all the soundz work great. keep it up!
thanks for the fear and constructive review. Its what I love to hear when i upload things to newgrounds. anyway...thanks for the review ;)
needs work
when a person has to turn down the volume to your music that is a bad sign that your track needs some work in the mastering department. plus you should have stopped this track in one cycle and called it a loop. you just have a really long loop that reapeats a bunch of times.
I do like where this track can go.
you got something here!
besides the random cowbell. you have it all in this track to make a good mix. the vocal needs to have a section where it stands out more and in general needs its volume level turned up. reminds me of telepopmusic mixed with dj micro. love the lead synth... and percussion if it stood out a lil more. do some mastering!
If you want to collab on this I am down for that otherwise inform when its finished!
Hey thx for the review. well yea i just whipped it up in like 30 mins. so its nothing special. But yea the cowbell is actually a symbol =P but w/e. Ill let ya know when i have something better.
nice beat!
i like the loop but you need to learn how to master as well. your file here is very quiet turn up the drum track and the master level so ppl can listen to your loop.
if you use fl studio i can help you out by fixing the flp and sending it back so you can see what to do.
Thanks mate, my audio settings turned out be a little messed up, so I didn't even realize it would be this quiet. I indeed must fix this.
Yes, I use fl studio, and I accept your kind offer :)
I barely know anything about mastering, so it will help me out a lot.
Hey Nice work!
I like your track and i am happy to say i use the same program as you!
something with your main synth feels like it doesnt match with the rest of your songs sounds.
if you ever want to remix or work together sometime let me know.
sure thing Thanks for the review. i'll check into that. i've only had the program for about 6 months so i'm sure u are more experienced than i am :)
Your not done!
Finish this song!
you have a great idea but you didnt elaborate on your idea. this song needs more variation and a highlight to it. you have all the soundz chosen and your key signature now stop looping and letting all the tracks run repeticiously and have fun!
let me know if you update it i will be interested to listen and give another review and a 5 vote
OK thank you for the review. I will try to eloborate. This is my first song :)
Nice soundz!
if you are going to remix make it awesome!
and i think you can if you go back to this piece and use an equalizer!
you have to much dead sound washing your track away. I want to here your song from strong drums and nice harmonius synths and hints at somepionts a chorus.
Also now that you layered your own soundz to a midi. make your own verse at the least so you can call it your own remix.
Thanks for the feedback. I like the constructive criticism. Knew I should've alteast mastered it a little better when I dug this thing up, heheh.
Hello There! Originally from New Jersey I spend most of my time going to college in Vermont and composing music. Currently have two albums in production and lots of experience using the music programs FLstudio, Ableton, and Cubase. Email me for a collab
Age 36, Male
Teacher
champlain college
Burlington VT, USA
Joined on 1/31/08