Cool idea!
I like what you did with the beats and instruments. the beginning seems a little to cluttered and would be more suitable as a climactic build. I think you have a lot of potential in this track to take it to a new level of epicness. if you want help or interested in talking more about the track with me post me!
It's cool!
I like all this song has to offer! just was a little repetitive.
what does the long mix have to offer?
thanks for the review um the long mix just has some more of the rythms and everything develops slower. i'll upload it soon :)
make it clear!
use an equalizer. it will sound much more profesional!
I might go back to this old track and fix it ,,
Yea could do with some EQ'ing on some channels for sure..
Kick needs work ,, isnt hittin sub or low bass really..
Thanks for the feedback ppl ,, much appreciated.. =]
cool stuff!
which program did you make the drum and bass riff in?
i like this track. i just wanted to listen to more variation in the tracks you made.
Well the samples are performed by myself and my bassist. We used Acid 5.0 to recorded and cut the samples.
you need to make a choice!
your bass and other soundz conflict with each other instead of complimenting each other. if you turn down the bass and clean up some of the soundz this track can be much better. and if it is hip hop just have it as a loop so that you dont say its a song when its not a full track yet. you just let your tracks loop anyways with a slight variation in the drums in the middle.
let me know if you make improvements i would like to listen to this piece again when it is finished.
listen to feelin this feelin
nice song!
it was worth it. and i know what having a failed folder for music is like. sometimes you listen to them again and remember why you ever enjoyed making that song in the first place.
I wish you had a louder version. this track is good but i have to turn up my volume on my speakers quite a bit to here it.
Thank you very much, Ive had the hardest time with the volume of music. For awhile they were too loud, now they are too soft. Ill fix that for sure, thank you very much!
Nice job!
i like your idea and how you can deliver a story of imagery!
I think you can make this piece even better if you tweak some of the sounds.
i like the use of reverb but your track is a lil to muffled. that can be fixed by turning the bass down a little.
nice composition
some mastery is needed though. you are getting a lil distortion. and sound volumes of the different tracks should be at different levels so that the song feels not so in your face. if you do this your track will be awesome!
I know its ambient
But i really believe it can transition into something on a much grander scale of epicness if it breaks that boundary!
i like the track just was hoping it will go farther.
I actually think you're right. I might end up doing a redux of this piece if I can push it any further.
the moog needs to be toned down!
simply if you are going to boast moog and drums then dont rub the moog in my face. i cant taste the pizza after my ears went tone death.
i like the beat and cuts of vocals.
Hello There! Originally from New Jersey I spend most of my time going to college in Vermont and composing music. Currently have two albums in production and lots of experience using the music programs FLstudio, Ableton, and Cubase. Email me for a collab
Age 36, Male
Teacher
champlain college
Burlington VT, USA
Joined on 1/31/08
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