Glitch!!!
so hard to do and sound really good and you pulled it off. I think it would help to work on not being so structured in the rest of the mix. just to keep the listener long enough to really enjoy your awesome verse.
Reminds me of the hours spent in some of my projects working to do glitch projects. a couple of my tracks on newgrounds that has glitch in it is:
Shattered Flakes and Moon Casting Rays.
I plan to do glitch percussion in one of my next songs but instead of doing percussion with drums I plan to do my percussion all with cut vocals and synths. and use the percussion as the melody. sounds weird and hard to comprehend but I have tried it before and it came out a disaster but had its cool parts.